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Walk, and I Will Be Beside You by ~Locked-in-the-Floor:iconLocked-in-the-Floor:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Song


If that's your master plan,
I fail to see the resolution,
I acknowledge this may be the only way,
So why aren't you well on your way?

Dearest,
I love you, I love you,
But what am I going to do with you?

Please don't fall with them,
Don't become another generation,
Damned to never dream again

I'll hold out my hand,
As you promise to hold the week,
How long can we wait?
Hiding under feather,
This makes no sense to me

Dearest,
I love you, I love you,
But what am I going to do with you?

A promise,
August is almost upon us,
Are you so confident in your master plan,
So confident he will provide?

I simply worry,
If only because I cannot see,
But I pray,
To see through the eyes of an optimist,
Whether now or never,
Sooner or later,
We will be dreamers together
©2009 ~Locked-in-the-Floor
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Author's Comments

Stand still, and I can only push so far.

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:iconeqlrytes:
~eqlrytes Jul 2, 2009, 3:05:12 PM
This one, such emotion, expresses your feelings well. Did she get to read it yet, I wonder?
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~Chibi-Akutenshi Jul 2, 2009, 9:45:30 PM
The expression is so good! I wanna know more details of the situation, even though I know it just by reading!

--
"It's so easy to cry but I want to smile. I want your love."
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~Locked-in-the-Floor Jul 3, 2009, 9:40:16 AM
Alas, no. Her internet's not very nice to her, and I havn't seen her so I can't write it down and show her =(

--
~Believer, believe it or not, you'll know,
When it ends and how it goes~
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~Locked-in-the-Floor Jul 3, 2009, 9:43:20 AM
Thank you so much =] I'm not sure how many details I can really give out in the open here, but I'm sure you've gotten the gist: simply trying to motivate one to chase her dreams, rather than letting herself give up on them.

--
~Believer, believe it or not, you'll know,
When it ends and how it goes~
:iconeqlrytes:
~eqlrytes Jul 3, 2009, 9:59:52 AM
Ah..ever heard of that archaic thing called the U.S. Postal Service?..LOL
I think that would be a nice gesture, write it out on some pretty paper..a nice keepsake...and send it off. Much nicer to actually hold the words in your hand..well..at least I think so..*smiles*
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~Locked-in-the-Floor Jul 3, 2009, 1:33:29 PM
XDD I can't believe I'd never actually thought of sending a letter. It's really ironic because my dad's a mailman.

--
~Believer, believe it or not, you'll know,
When it ends and how it goes~
:iconlocked-in-the-floor:
~Locked-in-the-Floor Jul 3, 2009, 1:33:33 PM
XDD I can't believe I'd never actually thought of sending a letter. It's really ironic because my dad's a mailman.

--
~Believer, believe it or not, you'll know,
When it ends and how it goes~
:iconlocked-in-the-floor:
~Locked-in-the-Floor Jul 3, 2009, 1:33:48 PM
XDD I can't believe I'd never actually thought of sending a letter. It's really ironic because my dad's a mailman.

--
~Believer, believe it or not, you'll know,
When it ends and how it goes~
:iconeqlrytes:
~eqlrytes Jul 3, 2009, 7:56:22 PM
just got home from work and dealing with 3 screaming banshees...Your comment made me laugh..I needed that..that was good!!! Maybe there's a discount for ya re: sending it overnight..hehehe
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